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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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You are the master artist Paint my botticelli With your boldest strokes Spread me open wide Across your leather canvas Encircle my face with a thread of pearls Cover my trembling mountains With your avalanche Capture my evanescence On your palate Of my delight Make me beautiful Impaled upon Your pen light |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew! You're fast getting the job done! This is what I call some hot metaphors and some great images evoked. Painted so well with words Lori. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Eric, you asked for it, glad I didn't disapoint. Lori |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
have we been introduced? ... my name is "Putty"  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ha! Rex your eyelids are drooping terribly. Wonder why? Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Rex, is that Silly Putty? And why is Eric talking about your eyes drooping, was my poem putting you to sleep? Lori |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I'm claiming the Fifth |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
a fifth of what Rex? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Jack Daniels...what else? Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Bartender! ... extra ice please!  |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Uh, damn Lori, this is kickass. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Glad you liked it Jerry. You guys want any more of that sort of thing you'll have to dig it out of the archives. |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Lori ... I'm sorry I can't make you beautiful Because you already are. |
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