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Suncleaver
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0 posted 2011-08-15 08:53 PM


Embody The Unspoken

Two hearts beat in unison,
One to the rhythm of far thunder,
The other, a tender ostinato
Offering the melodic sweetness
In counterpoints of sympathetic harmony,
And haunting refrains of soulful longing.

She sleeps so sweet...
And as her heart plays out the symphony
Of the infinitely unspoken
To the adoring caress of my fingertips
Upon each silver sinew within...

How would I tell her?
That I would speak the silent words
Beside her cheek,
Murmuring in a somatic serenity,
And embody the unspoken
In golden words untarnished?


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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2011-08-15 10:00 PM


What a nice surprise to read you here again, Suncleaver.  
Your poetry is like fine china, the simple beauty you convey is breathtaking,
I admire your writing very much.  

Welcome back good poet~

Suncleaver
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2 posted 2011-08-15 10:58 PM


Thank you, Blues.

It's been too long, far too long.

ebonygirl
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3 posted 2011-08-16 06:27 PM


Enjoyed your poem Suncleaver.
Ms. E

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4 posted 2011-08-18 03:58 PM


Beautiful and romantic write... it's good to see you posting again!
Suncleaver
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5 posted 2011-08-20 06:54 PM


Thank you.
Marchmadness
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6 posted 2011-08-20 11:38 PM


I've been missimg your poetry, Suncleaver. Glad you are back.
                               Ida

OwlSA
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7 posted 2011-08-21 03:06 AM


Exquisite poem superbly presented with the blending of the metaphor of the universal wordless language of music to illuminate the universal wordless language of love.

Owl

Margherita
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8 posted 2011-08-21 05:11 AM


Most beautiful words to savour and to absorb in their soft silent tune that echoes in all its charm.

M

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9 posted 2011-08-27 10:53 PM


It's good to see you back.  I missed your poetry.

Alison

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