Open Poetry #47 |
Embody The Unspoken |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Embody The Unspoken Two hearts beat in unison, One to the rhythm of far thunder, The other, a tender ostinato Offering the melodic sweetness In counterpoints of sympathetic harmony, And haunting refrains of soulful longing. She sleeps so sweet... And as her heart plays out the symphony Of the infinitely unspoken To the adoring caress of my fingertips Upon each silver sinew within... How would I tell her? That I would speak the silent words Beside her cheek, Murmuring in a somatic serenity, And embody the unspoken In golden words untarnished? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a nice surprise to read you here again, Suncleaver. Your poetry is like fine china, the simple beauty you convey is breathtaking, I admire your writing very much. Welcome back good poet~ |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thank you, Blues. It's been too long, far too long. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem Suncleaver. Ms. E |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful and romantic write... it's good to see you posting again! |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thank you. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I've been missimg your poetry, Suncleaver. Glad you are back. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite poem superbly presented with the blending of the metaphor of the universal wordless language of music to illuminate the universal wordless language of love. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Most beautiful words to savour and to absorb in their soft silent tune that echoes in all its charm. M |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It's good to see you back. I missed your poetry. Alison |
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