Open Poetry #47 |
The Death of 1000 Cuts |
Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
In the death of 1000 cuts, Sir, some may win, some may lose, but then were you opposed to a challange as this? I've a feeling that something's amiss. Whither goest m'friend, I've a blade, she's as sharp as the day as was made, and I've yet many arrows to sling yet await promised torment you'd bring. While all Pipdom doth languish for fuel to continue our poetic duel. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
And then he swiftly pulled off his glove and slapped him smartly across the face... Well done sir. Lori |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's play time, but I think he failed to hear the recess bell, Doc! LOL You know he'll claim he's been busy and won't admit he's just "skeered" LOL It's nice to know you're well prepared for the skirmishes, whenever they may come to pass! *smile* |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Lori, Lol, I thought if I posted some really, really terrible verse it would flush him out, if for no other reason than to tell me how bad it was. Oh well, I see this as an opportunity to continue the assault, as soon as I get some time, lol. Doc suthern, Lol, I'm sure you're right about him being busy, but not too sure about the "skeered" part. When he finds time, I'd like to think the fun will continue. Doc |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thought the title was "The Death of 1000 Cats" -- then I put on my glasses and realized that my tears were in vane (vein? vain? I think "vain" - oh well, glad that cats are okay). A |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Alison, Lol, the cats are fine as long as they don't read this, it's probably one of my worst. Doc |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Actually, I like the metaphor, Doc. It's a helluva being who can count cuts beyond five hundred, much less a thousand. My take on it was probably a darker aspect than intended, though. Probably. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Doth thou bring Pipdom joy and pleasure to the ear of thy reader? Yea, says I... Three cheers for Number One: PIP PIP hooray! PIP PIP hooray! PIP PIP hooray! JL |
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