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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-08-09 05:27 PM

She slips inside his dreams
soft as moonlight
she calls to him
and he is helpless
to resist her
as she dances
just for him
He feels her warm whisperings
stir him into sweet longing
for her caressing lips
He aches to wake
and take her
feeling her breathless
naked in his hands
Giving him a taste
of what romance is
when she slips inside his sleep

LGR(C)8/9/11

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2011-08-09 06:16 PM

It's almost Wednesday! I'll take it this is a sneak preview.

Truly, the stuff dreams are made of.

Nicely done.

Michael

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-08-09 06:57 PM

This was a very good poem.

~ If work is so terrific, why do they have to pay you to do it. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-10-2011 09:54 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-08-09 08:12 PM

oh Michael , now it is going to be Thursday! He said he meant Wednesday was going to be their last day there and they would leave Thursday morning (bummer)
Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2011-08-09 08:16 PM

Hey Jerry, (easy big guy) I'm glad you liked it!
Lori

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2011-08-10 02:02 PM

I'm sorry your reunion has been delayed... This is lovely!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2011-08-10 02:28 PM

me too...but I'm glad you liked the poem.
Lori

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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7 posted 2011-08-10 05:46 PM

Love this one!
Ms. E

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2011-08-10 06:02 PM

thank you ebonygirl! I appreciate you being here to read it.
Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

9 posted 2011-08-10 09:53 PM

I just now saw what you wrote about what I said. I am sorry if I, in any way, offended you, Lori. I changed it.

~ If work is so terrific, why do they have to pay you to do it. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2011-08-10 10:28 PM

No, silly, I wasn't offended sorry I didn't give you a smiley face. That was kind of where I was going with the piece ya know, so you were okay reacting to your dream girl. Relax, we're good.
Lori

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