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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2011-01-19 08:49 AM

LifeLines

I can't help it,
how I feel about you.
Sometimes wondering
why I can't break away,
yet wanting to be
even nearer than close.

There is no magic to us,
we are who we are,
two, alone in this world,
confined to ourselves
but secretly wanting more.

I am restless
when nighttime comes
because I know
my mind will be filled
with dreams of you
and all I can do
is see you behind closed eyes,
hold you in my thoughts,
kiss you in whispers
seeking to reach you somehow,
hoping you are dreaming for two.

I will never regret our shared moments
and will never lose hope,
but I wonder
if I kissed you deep enough
to touch you
where I can't be forgotten.
I wonder
if my eyes with their secrets
gave enough insight
of my emotional ties to you,
the tears, the hurt of the past,
the smiling whenever you appear.

What lies between us
is a lifeline stretched taut
at the moment,
making it hard to balance
more than one day at a time.
I am patient, knowing the value in "us"
and I am rewarded
each morning, when my heart feels
the presence of your words.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-01-19 10:22 AM

Oh this is wonderful! The expression of love here is special.
Lori

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-01-19 10:43 AM

Very, very beautiful, Maureen.

Owl

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2011-01-19 11:48 AM

Oh. My. Gumbo. Beyond beautiful.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2011-01-19 01:07 PM

Passionate poetry in my opinion.

~ Clones are people two ~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2011-01-19 01:19 PM

Wow! You sure can write those deep emotional feelings Maureen.

This part is just so so beautifully melancholy reflecting from the very depths of your heart.

"I will never regret our shared moments
and will never lose hope,
but I wonder
if I kissed you deep enough
to touch you
where I can't be forgotten.
I wonder
if my eyes with their secrets
gave enough insight
of my emotional ties to you,
the tears, the hurt of the past,
the smiling whenever you appear."

Just that something more to make it complete......I don't know what else to say/write..

Eric

two maggots were fighting in dead earnest!

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

6 posted 2011-01-19 01:26 PM

Beautiful and moving...very heartfelt

Amaryllis

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-01-19 01:28 PM

you do romantica well ms MMs

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2011-01-22 01:50 PM

Thank you, a little old / a little new to spark some inspiration in me~~

M

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