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In the big blue sea
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In the big blue sea |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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In the big blue sea I set adrift one day to see what I could see I set sail to find my my lost paradise and found treasures along the way I came across an island filled with exotic and rare places to explore that nothing could compare I was enraptured by my adventures there Sights that touched my soul took me by surprise and changed me to this day My moon waxed and waned the tide it did return me to the shores of home with pockets full of sand memory souveniers LGR(C)8/4/11 |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
Enjoyed it. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks TL66  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Fantastic meandering, Lori. If we can experience fullness as we go our merry way through life, sampling different things and foreign sand we have done well. Just as you have done well explaining that concept here. ~ If I agreed with you we'd both be wrong. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you my friend...however far we may roam there is no place like home...even when it is in your very own skin Lori |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sometimes when you reach that "paradise" you find it nothing but a letdown... It's then those treasures along the way are truly appreciated. Michael |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
or it is a great place to visit but you just couldn't live there... Lori |
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