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Port Huron |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Yes I remember Or it is better to say I recall how I wanted It to be There are sparrows And other marvels Filling the sky With their wanderings While swans in pairs Glide along the shore There is trust In my fidelity An understanding That some men are brave And capable of love That the world Travels its nights Lit by brilliant stars The moon shines Through long years An autumn breeze Ruffles your hair Over the collar Of your coat . |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Beautiful imagery, fine writing. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
The stanza that opens is perfect, sets up the poem, and the readers mind for whats to come.. I am amazed by your talent to paint a scene with so little pigment..and yet through your brush strokes, the world, in increments, is explained. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautifully expressed, John. Ida |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
lovely |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thanks everyone I'm glad you liked it John . |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You had me in the first 4 lines... and it just kept getting better. *S* |
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