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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2011-07-30 12:02 PM

Life
Life to live
Live to grow
Grow to learn
Learn to explore
Explore the world
World of challenge
Challenge your mind
Mind what you say
Say what you mean
Mean to be kind
Kind in heart
Heart and soul
Soul survivor
Survivor of heartbreak
Heartbreak of love
Love for the lost
Lost and forgotten
Forgotten by all
All are dying
Dying of life
Life

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2011-07-30 12:11 PM

Extremely clever and well done, Kat!

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2011-07-30 12:30 PM

Thanks Deer! Glad you stopped by to check out my poem. Your comments are greatly welcomed.
Kat >^..^<

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2011-07-30 12:44 PM

I agree. Very clever and very well said.

Alison

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2011-07-30 01:24 AM

Thanks Alison!
Kat >^..^<

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

5 posted 2011-07-30 04:20 AM

I like it alot ... I have writers block tonight....but I did get one out

~~~kingsangel~~~

Michael

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since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2011-07-30 02:32 PM

kat,

Very well done. Creativity is a beautiful thing.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2011-07-30 02:41 PM

VERY well done!

~ Forget the health food. I need all the preservatives I can get. ~

The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

8 posted 2011-07-30 06:21 PM

Brilliant execution. I like it.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

9 posted 2011-07-31 05:20 PM

Very cool poem,
ebonygirl

tuffluv66
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since 2011-05-13

Posts 121
Iowa, U.S.A.

10 posted 2011-08-01 05:37 PM

I think..that it is indeed a beautifully written and executed poem. I really enjoyed it.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2011-08-02 12:36 PM

Very clerly done, katahdin.
Ida

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

12 posted 2011-08-03 08:59 PM

Thanks all!!
Kat >^..^<

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2011-08-05 12:26 PM

Very creative! I really like this! *S*

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