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still smell the roses |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA 
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i'll still smell the roses so precious and sweet the scented pine needles as they hang from the trees i'll still hear the lonely hounds at night as they bay see the sky far above me be it blue or at times gray then someone someday will mention your name and i'll feel regret in my veins for in my heart your love remains There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is very beautifully written. I know the feeling.  When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Can't shake that love disease stuck in the heart. Very well done I agree with you totally. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
easily leaves the reader a feeling little melancholy enjoyed |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Yes, you most certainly will. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is as it should be, Faith. I am sorry for your loss. I am assuming this is about the same man as in another very recent poem of yours - the title evades me. Owl |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
thank you everyone for all of your wonderful responses...i appreciate them very much There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the only condolence my meager mind can think to phrase is...at least when you love, you feel...and regardless of what you feel, it is still a good thing to feel...thank you for sharing this precious moment |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
and I thank you for your kind and generous comments...i appreciate them so much There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautifully written and expressed, faith. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautifully written and expressed, faith. Ida |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I feel your melancholy pain here Faith. well done. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I think....when you love someone, you love them forever, they're always in your heart; if their memory brings pain or pleasure, depends on the outcome of that love I guess. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Thank you all so much There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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