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Open Poetry #47

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-07-28 08:33 AM

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Sometimes
I feel my soul
Kissing you

Your cheek
Your brow
Your lips
Your image
In the air

I pause there
Silently still
Waiting
For his return

This nothing
Is something
I don’t understand

All I can do
Is write it down

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2011-07-28 07:18 PM

"This nothing
Is something
I don’t understand"

to me much of life seems that way, John

M

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-07-29 12:43 PM

I am glad that you do write "it" down, John. I try not to miss any of your poems.

A

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2011-07-29 04:11 PM

Lots of feeling and very much liked.
ebonygirl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2011-07-31 10:45 PM

Fine writing...I feel like I'm living their sometimes...James

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2011-07-31 10:50 PM

Loved it my friend, as all of yours I read.

j.

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