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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-07-26 10:54 AM

I wish that I could say
to hell with
obligations
Work and relatives
will just have to do
without me
I wish that I was packing
for a trip
to be with you
there and traveling
all the sights to see
just you and me
I wish that I would be
beside you
every night
hugged and held tight
instead of my heart
longing for you
I wish that I was going
along with
you my sweet love
Work and relatives
having to do
without me

LGR(C)7/26/11

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2011-07-26 11:34 AM

I wish, too... and you've written the longing beautifully! *S*

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-07-26 11:59 AM

Thank you so much. It is an honor to hear from you.
Lori

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-07-26 01:02 PM

I wish you horses...

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2011-07-26 02:28 PM

I really hope your wish comes true
for that is also my wish too!
ebonygirl

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-07-26 05:21 PM

Yeah, the prayer of those who have to be left behind. The "wanting" is your words are very apparent.

~ Money can't buy happiness, but broke can't buy anything. ~

Daddy Goose38
Member

since 2010-09-04

Posts 430
obama's a rice paper tiger

6 posted 2011-07-26 05:29 PM

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww ... Sweet Lori
I sish I could tell you what sweet comfort I feel when reading your poems, how they are always there for me to reread when I'm felling a bit too lonely.
Okay ... I know it's for everybody ... but ... :-----)
H u g e H U G S and tender sighs

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2011-07-26 07:37 PM

Nice...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2011-07-31 12:27 PM

I wish this for you too ~ and often feel the same way. Good writing, Lori.

A

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2011-07-31 01:58 AM

just remember you're both under the same moon . . . and if you agree upon a time, and you both grab a moment of solitude then, and look at the moon...surprising what you can see, hear, feel ... heartbeats, whispers, breath on your cheek, lips brushing your. . . .momentarily, but true.

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2011-07-31 07:29 AM

I believe you J., sounds like a brilliant idea,..to me anyway...may sound a little flakey to him...but he is a good sport about humoring me...
Lori

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