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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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turning moments around between the pages folding over those special ones where you were there with your eyes and the look backs over shoulders something about the bronze of you I have wondered of tasting the sun after you danced with him for hours and had his residue on as your armor you said I could remove it slowly if I took my time with your buttons since you loved that feeling during like getting undressed was freedom and you never had to put it on again ____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-22-2011 10:48 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
turning moments around between the pages.... ah Mr Daark I like the visuals here from you .. Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
that is indeed an opening line most fine !! interesting 'write' ! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R&B, thanks lady _____________ 2ndhanddreampoet, thank you much |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Awww hmmm, a turn of the page never read so well. Your poetry of late is smokin' hot dark dude! Gotta love the sizzle! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue thanks babe, speaking of smoking hot! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
You draw "sin"sual pictures. Smiles, Ebonygirl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms ebony The inspiration is heavenly. Thanks lady |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Great imagery to the mind’s eye, fine writing, Dark. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
prasad, thank you so much my friend |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The lines you write are decorous with cymbalisom... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks sun fun lady.. |
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