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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2011-07-20 08:20 AM

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Ah summer moon
Your being recalls
A big red dog
On yellow dunes

A wooden bridge
With missing boards
Silver fish
In beams of light

On an island
In a green lagoon
A father and son
With bamboo poles

A single ship
Coming home from sea

A slender girl
Her starry night


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2011-07-20 10:32 AM

John,

This is just an overall pleasurable read.
Thank you so much!
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2011-07-21 10:40 PM

Indeed!
        Ida
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