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Blue Eyes Dreaming |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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~~~ Not far it was from Heaven 'twas the very month of June and the sweetest birds were singing when first she stole my tune ... As if from out the bluest sky an angel came to call Quintessence of Irish memory with braids as I recall The golden sun's shine o'er the dew reflected through her eyes Like flowers from a woodland path her smile just mesmerized With dancer's wings she stepped along my song held in her arms My blue eyes dreaming hypnotized now locked within her charms "Good day kind sir" sweet melody embraced my very soul With butterflies and rubber thighs my tongue I swear it swoll My heart stood tall to brace my jaw an lock the molars tight The best I managed was a smile my voice had taken flight Pausing she locked her gaze to mine reached out to my lapel Placed a fragrant flower there bent close to share its smell The moment stole my breath from me I gazed in pure delight Enchanted with her beauty rare awoke to silent night ~~~ |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Enchanting ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
wonderful poem great work. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You certainly have a way with words, Rex. I like your style. Ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw! Why'd you have to wake up from that one?! I was enjoying it so much. I was going to put a tune to it and market it as an Irish Spring commercial....But this waking up to silent night thing and it's not even Christmas... Dang! But dang good poetry. Eric Love does not look after it's own interests. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Drat! Dreaming again. When this poem began and I read the line "when first / she stole my tune ..." I flashed back to an old song by Melanie by the name of "Look What They've Done to My Song, Ma." ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
if the women in our dreams could meet the men in their dreams...we would all be replaced I imagine...enjoyed it rex |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sorry about your luck dude guess you'll have to settle for something of the warm and wonderful persuasion. Your ending was great! Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I enjoyed your dream very much, Rex. Sorry you had to wake up. Giggles at Eric's twist to your silent night. Owl |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks everyone ... she should have pinned her phone # to my lapel ... it's been a silent night ever since  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I was mesmerized, spellbound and then wham! we woke up! beautifully done! |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I adore this. Looking on the bright side, even if it was just a dream; dreams are always better than nightmares  Enjoyed.-Trina |
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