Open Poetry #47 |
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Von Koren |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan ![]() |
. Ah young Werther Our world is sick of you Here’s an answer do it a favor It shouldn’t be all that hard How we’ve suffered your sorrows Eternal whiner no longer fashionable Listened it seems all our waking hours To your idiom of being misunderstood Your broken heart and tortured soul Can both with blessings go to Hell A single room a few plain chairs And four gray walls without a door Where two or more just like you With equally nothing better to do Will argue forever who or who Loudly is the most miserable And no one keeping score . |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
very interesting, I had to do some research, but I think I need to ponder more and read a book lol Juju -Juju |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
very interesting, I had to do some research, but I think I need to ponder more and read a book lol Juju -Juju |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Juju Thanks for reading This has three components Von Koren is a primary character in Chekhov’s “The Duel” Werther is Goethe’s “The Sorrows of Young Werther” And Hell reflects Sartre’s “No Exit”. It was fun bringing Them together. Thanks again John . |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Your sure let 'em have it. Well done Huan Yi. There's nothing more boring or annoying than someone repeating their ills and misfortunes ad nauseam. Marcia www.thewritingforum.net |
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