Open Poetry #47 |
Lamentations |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are the friend I'll keep sacred in mind. Your life was a gift that will transcend all time. The smiles that we shared cannot be erased. You'll live on forever whenever I face a mountain so high that I doubt my own strength, the memory of you will make me stronger then. If any shall doubt you or dare to condemn, I'll have our memories on which to depend, to summon the strength that it takes to forgive those who would judge you the brief time you lived most weren't as lucky as I know I've been; they didn't know you--and you were my friend. Your life was a gift--your death, sacrifice. A reminder to all just how precious is life. Some days will be sunny. Some days it will rain. Some days will pass slowly and be filled with pain. I'll think of you often with this promise fulfilled: when I can't be strong, it's enough to be still. I'll summon all angels to sing out the call, to comfort your family as you embrace all the promise of life everlasting you'll keep. Heaven will welcome you. We mortals weep. * * * http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1xF4UZppqbo&feature=related ***** I borrowed the voice of a special young man I know who is going through a particularly trying time as he suffered the loss of a friend. Sadly, I think the pain is known by most of us. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine 'tribute' write! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, Karen... this is poignant, and beautiful. This is what I was hoping to see when I dared to peak back in here. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm quite sure your special young man treasures this tribute and lament, Karen. ~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Very touching my dear Serenity, not your average form, which to me, makes it all the more poignant. Doc |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm so rusty I'm corroded, but I appreciate that you guys overlook the poor meter, the slant rhymes, and punctuation errors, and felt the honest emotion behind the inspiration. Life is horribly wonderful thing... And Doc? I wish I could write as elegantly as you, sir. Something in me behooves the "neat" rhyme. Love to you all. Thanks for your time and understanding. I want to thank everybody yet again. I posted this so I could send my friend a card. She appreciated it. Thank you Ron, for giving me a safe place to keep my memories. Ciao everybody. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I listened to the song while reading your deeply poignant words and they really tugged at my heartstrings. Precious! Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen... I know your friend must have appreciated this...I sure did! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Darling girl, I can't say what is in my heart, because you would not want to hear it, because this poem is not about you even when it is. You are all everyone would ever need in a friend, and then you invite others in. Love, K |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..very sensitive..one feels each word.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the best thing we can do for a friend is to just do the best we can for a friend you did well lady |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful K, just beautiful! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
what is this meter thing you speak of? |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I have no words worthy, just here to say, my admiration for you will never fade. jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
One can feel the love and deep emotion you've poured into this poem. Your sentiments are heartfelt and truly lovely, and they suit your pen name beautifully. Reads like a prayer, Serenity~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A poignant and beautiful tribute, Karen. Very touching. ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When you rhyme, you take mere words onto another plane and I can only bow my head at their beauty. This is a powerful, poignant tribute, K... |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Beautiful, ebonygirl |
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