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Open Poetry #47

Vacant exchange

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

0 posted 2011-07-15 02:17 PM

Vacant exchange

Those gentle fingers of yours cover my midnight light,
Wavy curly tantrum plays of those thick black locks,
Mysterious twinkle surrounds your eyelids at dark,
Pleasant radiant glow around your tender cheeks,

Nectar filled delicious cautious rhythmic petals,
Shimmering droplets of majestic pearls gliding down,
Through the folds of silky silk naughty innocent robe,
Break my eternal silences, that engulfs our soul,

Your deviating deadly curves make me a sinner,
Those many twist and turns, random change of plans,
The dampness that you leave behind my window sill,
Words you seek, though feelings are my cup of tea,

Aroma, ecstasy, pleasure is what draws your tongue,
Tender warmth is what my conversation really needs,
Prints on the empty park benches you quietly leave,
Vacant exchange of unwilling midnight rain is what I feel.

©Prasad.N 15th July 2011.
All rights reserved to Prasad.N

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-07-15 04:41 PM

This is good, my friend. Exceptional even. The love showered throughout the lines of this jewel is vibrant and heartfelt. Food poetry.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2011-07-15 06:39 PM

Nice writing...James

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-07-15 07:06 PM

I think this is enchanting, dear Prasad! You write so beautifully, read it already twice and will read it again.

Love,
Margherita

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

4 posted 2011-07-16 11:51 AM

Thank you Jerry, for such kind words. Appreciate it.
Thank you for your comments James. Appreciate it.
Thank you for your kind words dear Margherita, Appreciate it.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

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