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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-07-15 10:23 AM

I saw you in my past one day,
Sitting by the poolside café.
Your attraction was poise and grace,
Mona Lisa smile on your face.

Sophistication was your charm,
Me? I was from down on the farm.
Mona Lisa smile on your face,
You were high-toned intricate lace.

Our eyes met, my heart I misplaced,
Mona Lisa smile on your face.
You looked away, you were demure,
I was smitten by your allure.

Mona Lisa smile on your face,
I felt I was in outer space.
Found the grit to speak to you,
Felt like the winner of a coup.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2011-07-15 02:42 PM

And I'll bet she was everything
you were imagining...

Enjoyed, Jerry. Thanks!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-07-15 04:28 PM

Ab-so-lutely, Sunshine! Thanks for being herel

~ Employ teenagers while they know everything. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-07-15 06:34 PM

Delightful, dear Jerry! Very beautifully rendered "coup de foudre"!

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2011-07-15 06:39 PM

Sounds like she was one you couldn't resist...James

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2011-07-15 06:39 PM

Yes to "coup de foudre," although I needed to look it up. I like the expression and I'm sure it will end up n the next novel I write. Thanks, Margherita.

~ Employ teenagers while they know everything. ~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-07-15 06:40 PM

Thanks, James. You're right.

~ Employ teenagers while they know everything. ~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 2011-07-15 08:29 PM

A very pleasant memory you have shared here... thank you.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-07-15 10:04 PM

Appreciate the thought, Michael . . .

~ Employ teenagers while they know everything. ~

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

9 posted 2011-07-16 11:35 AM

Glad you took the courage to appreciate her beauty, Jerry.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2011-07-16 11:42 AM

It was an inevitable thing. I looked. I saw. I continued looking. Thanks, Prasad.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

Word Weaver
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since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

11 posted 2011-07-16 01:22 PM

I think this is grand. Switch the genders and it reminds me of a man I once saw who had Paul Newman eyes. I married him.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2011-07-16 01:28 PM

Now those eyes were something to see. I'm talking about Paul Newman. I'm a man and I was even struck by those blue eyes. SOB had everything else to go along with those eyes too. Liked Newman.

Thanks for stopping by, Marcia.

~ Eggs and bacon, honeymoon style / What's honeymoon style? / Straight up and hard. ~

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