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Open Poetry #47

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-07-13 05:15 PM

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Off old docks
With broken timbers

Under a silver moon
Whose soft white light
Sparkles on inland seas

They stow their gear
As through the air
Ship bells ring
In silent harbors

And if I listen
Very carefully

Outbound
For adventure

I can hear them
Call my name

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-07-13 05:36 PM

Very endearing atmosphere ... ship bells are something I have memorized too in my childhood (even if only on the lake of Zurich), I love the sound! It does create an association with adventure indeed.

Love this very much.

M

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2011-07-13 07:16 PM

I love the water too. The vastness of water is much deeper then the "grass is greener", but instead leaves me with going because its there.

juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2011-07-13 09:09 PM

an especially fine one, John !

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