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Open Poetry #47

the green demon

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-01-17 08:08 PM

lately i've been seeing
the green demon
when i least expect it
he's reflected
in my rearview mirror

i'm sure he's aware
of my secret stares
still he give no indication
once the foolish games begun

his helmet hides his hair color
his jacket his physique
but i swear
i know that profile
though my memory grows weak

lately i've been meeting
with the green demon
his honda three-fifty screaming
in a race that's never won

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-17 08:45 PM

Ah . . . Sound like a recurring daymare to me / Either that or a blast from the past . . .

~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-01-17 08:52 PM

JerryPat-I appreciate your comments... thanks for being here.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-01-18 11:46 PM

I must admit that I don't completely understand this but I'll bet there's a very interesting story behind it.
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