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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-07-13 06:35 AM

the rabid rising of mercury
and the swelter of breedlove cane
sweat burns the eyes like salt
and wiping with a wet arm after
is peeing in a flooded river

and you whisper, watch for my return

____________

daark (bibs and bibles series)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-07-13 10:37 AM

Hah! Title drew me in / Heat kept me there

~ Employ teenagers while they know everything. ~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-07-13 10:45 AM

Thanks guy.

Am sure Padre Phud will take exception.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2011-07-13 03:09 PM

A new series to enjoy...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-07-13 03:14 PM

Ms sun. We shall see how it goes. Thanks lady.

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

5 posted 2011-07-15 01:52 PM

Looks like sweet summer scene, enjoyed the sun.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-07-15 01:54 PM

Thanks Prasad

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2011-07-15 06:23 PM

My eyes burn ... maybe for the screening of the skies ...

... instead of looking within where the light flickers without burning.

This made me smile in a first moment, but in the moment after I perceived its complexity.

Curious for the next rebus!

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2011-07-16 01:43 AM

Damn, I can't take the heat. But, I sure like the poem.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2011-07-16 04:54 AM

ms mar, thank you

________________

ms ali-san, thank you babe

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2011-07-21 12:50 PM

I just keep thinking that I should duck. Don't know why and it makes no sense. But, I AM ducking.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2011-07-21 07:15 AM

ms ali...well since you are leaning over in my lap anyway...

Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

12 posted 2011-07-21 02:17 PM

When we're finished destroying this earth He will return.

Your poetry reminds me of that of a poet at my own website; I don't always know what he's saying but I love his writing. I hope that makes sense.

Namaste'

Marcia
www.thewriitingforum.net

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2011-07-21 02:47 PM

Ms Marcia

Thanks lady. I suspect he will wear a hazmat suit too.

This was a play on the waiting for his return punishment.

I may know the writer you speak of. I think he is my Prozac vendor.

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