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Open Poetry #47

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-07-12 11:11 AM

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The green lawn
Under the willow’s shadow
Is cool and still

I take pleasure
Again on this summer day
In the simple measures
Of being alone

No one here
To tell me what to do
The time is mine
To laugh and sing
As I may choose

Or nothing at all
Save alive quietly lying here
Letting this freedom
Flow through my hair

.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-07-12 05:44 PM

Most beautiful and positive.

M

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2011-07-12 09:41 PM

I really like this one as well.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2011-07-13 07:54 PM

understanding this ... jo

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2011-07-14 05:20 PM

Serenity...freedom. What more can one ask for.
ida

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

5 posted 2011-07-17 02:32 AM

At least both the poet and the willow still have hair!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2011-07-20 03:50 PM

I used to confuse being alone with being lonely, but now I seek and relish the "me" time... when nothing's demanded but all things are possible... and I'm with company I enjoy. *S*

That said... I really like this! *S*

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

7 posted 2011-07-20 06:36 PM

Simply wonderful and well enjoyed.

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

8 posted 2011-07-20 09:33 PM

Huan Yi - Land the plane! Stop the bus! Let me out of the car! I see a tree over there with grass under it and a wind is blowing. I'm outta here. Thanks for the inspiration HY. Namyh

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