Open Poetry #47 |
Petina and Sepia Tones |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Superimposed sketched in petina and sepia tones tracing you with my eyes closed outlining your silhouette transfers the moment caressing the movement blending shades details my thoughts memorizing the finer points drawing me to you cast in the sunlight brazen and bronzed. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine Impressionistic imagery and Romanticism! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Whew! Now that is what I call memorializing someone within your thoughts. You had it written so well I had an image of your object of delight. ~ Husbands are chiefly good lovers when they are betraying their wives.--Marilyn Monroe ~ |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
ooh, nice and lilting (implied) melody. LIKEY! You rock, Blues. Wish I had that kinda lyrical flow in my stuff. Keepin' this one. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, when you post, I read. It's just that easy. Thank you, blusey one. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue and some tan too...this one sounds like you babe |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Got to go with the crowd on this one...I really like it too. Brazen and bronze-my favorite Lori |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for the read and for you nice comments, dreampoet~ I appreciate your support and encouraging replies. Thanks JP~ Hey soul drifter, what a nice surprise, thank for the likey and for taking time to read and leave a reply. I really appreciate that. You're just too sweet, thank you Alison. Thanks for looking cool dude, and for always reading me DS.... Makes me happy. Hi Lori, thanks for reading me. Glad to know you liked that part too. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Like Alison...You post I read. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love to follow your eyes and to perceive your visualization of magic, dear Lori! Wonderful! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are so beautiful |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Wow! Bluesy, this is wonderful and easy to relate. I am so glad I stopped in for a moment and saw your post. It seems I have writer's block and rarely hold a pen, but I do have petina and sepia tones tucked away. I love your poem. It paints the moment so well. It is so good to read you again! (Saving your poem.) -miscellanea |
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