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The In, Between |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy 
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The In, Between ( a song ) In mighty time, a trusted smile, a reliant ally Sometimes when a nip of nap is just enough Forgive my speculations if my thoughts dally stuck between time, where smooth is rough. CHORUS I had no choice – I had no right You told me so, gyroscope eyes! Held you all throughout the night In between ecstasy and silver sighs. Knowing what I know now What did the angels tell me? ...that love is a solemn vow and that rest was just candy? So night shapes shadows, to fill your dreams and while sacred blankets watch your smile oceans are jello: clouds made of ice cream A perfect day, perfect night, none can defile. CHORUS: I had no choice – I had no right You told me with crimson eyes. Held you all throughout the night inbetween musing and silvertipped highs. We are always stuck within our dreams into the in and in, between half free. [This message has been edited by threadbear (07-08-2011 04:46 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, those angel eyes... turning vixen like that... would love to hear the notes behind this one!  |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Angel Eyes is one of my favorite songs, btw, Kar. Thanks for humming along, breath of Sunshine, Jeff |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY interesting 'write' ! "We ARE (all) stuck within our dreams" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How lovely those "silver sighs" and "silvertipped highs"! A very dreamy song, created with great skill, dear Jeff. Love, M |
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