Open Poetry #47 |
velocity of sage |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it would be more diffictult to consider the model of you as a sporting mechanism even with your do it quick disposetion and how your curves handled my steering which suggested you were designed for speed but the sound of your high performance ignition just before you took my eyes and hands on and made them admire your fluid finish slowly as if searching for the right buttons there to open you up into full throttle acceleration and I, never wanted to know how fast you were when I was admiring your moistened upholstry and the flavors of your skin seeping exotics that scent you called temptation I think was far more of a pleasure then just sliding in and out of your almost free will confinment _____________ daark |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is very beautifully written. My mind just went into gutter when I pictured this piece in my mind. I don't know if you were talking about a car or something else. LOL When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
DA..how about a radio controlled jaguar that uses gutters as freeways? Thanks for the eyes and where your mind went. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Whew! Kickass. ~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks jp.. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"how your curves handled my steering" as usual, a very cool write |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh c'mon, gimmie that ice pack. You makin steam here. "and I, never wanted to know how fast you were when I was admiring your moistened upholstry and the flavors of your skin seeping exotics that scent you called temptation I think was far more of a pleasure then just sliding in and out of your almost free will confinment" Gulp! Almost choked. Great writing that can't be denied. Write on!! Eric Love does not look after it's own interests. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr, thanks amigo ________________ et, thanks my friend |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
haha...ok, my mind was in the gutter right along with DA Always a pleasure. -Trina |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
smiled all the way through this one |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
great write...enjoyed it much There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
but the sound of your high performance ignition just before you took my eyes and hands on and made them admire your fluid finish slowly as if searching for the right buttons there to open you up into full throttle acceleration ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's one way to rev it up! Gotta love fast cars and dark strangers!! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Ooh! And aah! And OMG you're talking about a Harley, right? Has to be. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"that scent you called temptation I think was far more of a pleasure then just sliding in and out of your almost free will confinment" sigh Stranger darlin' just sigh |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sinz..thanks lady ______________ rex, thanks my friend _______________ ms faith, thank you ms ____________________ babyblue..you always rev me babe ____________________ garapan, thanks so much for the read _________________ lady1, your sighs are priceless, thanks ms |
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