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Open Poetry #47
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
0 posted 2011-07-01 02:06 PM

I lay back in my day dream canoe
trailing my fingers in the waters of you
Your laughter splashes me
with tranquility
as I float along
listening to your water song

LGR(C)7/1/11
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-07-01 02:20 PM

Nice work, Lori, especially liked "Your laughter splashes me."

~ Man who wants pretty nurse, must be patient. ~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-07-01 02:25 PM

Thanks Jerry, I'm kinda fond of that line myself
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