Open Poetry #47 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
you put on lipstick and kissed that brick leaving a place in my mind for later when I would stop at this corner and put my foot down for a moment I would glance over and grin at you as if you were still there on tiptoes with just so little leather on but plenty of woman inside wanting out you said I would ride on then quickly but you would hear my thunder for miles and it would wet you no matter when or who you were with if anyone then and maybe we would run into each other down at this corner for a drink or two perhaps some more slow dance songs maybe breakfast at your place after you said the shade was called forever ____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-29-2011 11:42 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I had a come hither color once upon a moon ago but then it paled and that ship sailed... good stuff, D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...the residue is always visible even when the bricks are gone thanks lady friend |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
...you place a memory where there was none...Always easy to be "there" when I read you I was inspired by a loss of words, |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I don't think I'll ever sell another "Red Brick" lip liner (Avon) again without thinking of you now. I think they need a red shade called "Innuendo". Yes? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms muted..thank you for going there and smiling. ____________ ms kl, thank lady...so you are the one that sold it to her....knowing how it would create a trigger. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Well, you are right on target... heheh |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks lady!!that color goes with almost everything.. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
I especially like the first verse. Nicely done. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
RMW..thanks for the read |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
good job! love your title. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks huge Eminor [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-07-2011 11:35 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh dude you're killing me, gottta love that "shade"...of dark. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...looks good on you lady...thanks |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Brick red lips after Dark. Liked, ebonygirl |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I know that shade....somewhere between now and eternity....... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms ebony thank you for the lingering _______ Thanks angelbaby |
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tuffluv66 Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 121Iowa, U.S.A. |
Avery good read. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks much Tuff!! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Sounds like a little love poem, the Dark way. Ms. ebony- smiles |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E. Perhaps just a little. Thanks babe |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You paint such a vivid picture with your words... we don't just see a scene, we live it. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suthern, I enjoy your attending my penpressions. Thank lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: And you give us the perfect illusion of its real projection into forever ... It's such a pleasure to "attend your penpressions" ![]() ![]() Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Mar, thank you poetess for your touch |
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