Open Poetry #47 |
Road Kill |
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
ROAD KILL Poor little animal laying in the road I wonder, are you a chipmunk, a squirrel, or a toad No, It's much bigger than that I pray it's not a little dog or a cat! I really couldn't tell from afar Which poor creature was hit by a car Maybe a raccoon, a beaver, or a porcupine with quill How unlucky for you to become road kill Whew! Pee-U! Now I can really tell No one could forget that smell! It was an unfortunate skunk that was struck His revenge, leaving his stench on the grill of the truck! [This message has been edited by katahdin (06-29-2011 01:35 AM).] |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I am not sure how to interpret this one, but road kill is pretty rapant up here... juju |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks for your reply Juju. There is nothing really to interpert. It's just a fact of life that road kills happen everywhere. Saw one on my way home from work, that is all. Kat >^..^< |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wonder how long it is going to take for evolution to finally give the animals a fear of black-topped roads and vehicles? I have seen some dogs (not many) in my life, and cats seem to cross roads more wary than even dogs, so maybe in another thousand years it will happen. ~ Man who wants pretty nurse, must be patient. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ha! I love this delightful light piece of dark humor. It was fun to read and your rhymes flowed like fresh guts on the freeway! Lori |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Kat - This has a poetic lesson for all of us. If you live and don't or can't read the road signs of life, you could end up as 'road kill'. Nicely crafted Kat. Namyh |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kat, you are a real stinker for doing this ya know...enjoyed it lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ahhhh, I can smell it from here. Poor little Flower-skunk. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
LOL Thanks everyone for checking out my stinkin poem! Kat >^..^< |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
LOL! Thanks everyone for checking out my stinkin poem! Kat >^..^< |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
LOL! Thanks everyone for checking out my stinkin poem! Kat >^..^< |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Karen, You don't even want to know about the armadillo DNA that my husband decided to discover upon a road trip to Texas back in 2007. And us, in my NEW car....my pretty new PIM [Nissan Altima] [PIM - Poetry in Motion] my pretty new deep cherry red PIM... and the worst part? He could have AVOIDED the scandal of running over an inflated armadillo! That poor thing had to have been out there at least 3 days, as inflated as it was by internal gasses..... Oh, the stories we could tell...and talk about the smells! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Reminds me of the song "Dead skunk in the middle of the road" A fun poem, but the theme stunk at the end..lol enjoyed |
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