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Open Poetry #47

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Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2011-06-26 09:24 PM

Anger still speaking
stronger than love
never knowing when
enuf is enuf

as wishes fall deaf
on the humminbirds ears
and prayers get lost in the well

you wander the twisted
path they paved
ignoring
the voices in hell

knowing that the heart
always holds it's own hand
you let your soul
play the hand it was dealt

never forgetting
to remember
that in the end
they only win
because
you choose to lose

~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2011-06-27 11:56 AM

ms king...we play the cards we are handed or we just reach over and take the hand from someone else. Enjoyed your pen here

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-06-30 08:55 PM

Whoa! Kickass ending. There are many who merely "choose to lose" and complain about the injustice of it all. Quite an in-depth piece of writing.

~ Man who wants pretty nurse, must be patient. ~

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

3 posted 2011-07-01 05:28 AM

Daark, Yes we could steal someone elses hand that is true but.....isn't the queen of hearts your best bet???

~~~kingsangel~~~

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

4 posted 2011-07-01 05:35 AM

Jerry,

Thanks for the comment I kind of wrote it in reflection of the times...it can relate to many people...and it reflects me in those dark moments as people try and try again to pave my road....and so the story goes I win because I choose to...

~~~kingsangel~~~

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