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Open Poetry #47

tuxedos and rented coffee

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-06-22 06:43 AM

we found dirt roads in the middle of towns
like they were secret treasures
only our bare feet could realize

moments were journey songs long enough
for us to make books of our thoughts
and then read them to each other after

the strangers always seemed to look away
like we had our invisible pulled around
so you didn't mind how you sounded then

when you pretended you were a woman wanting
and I was a man who had everything
you could take away if you wanted to

although you knew my shirt was stolen

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daark

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-06-22 11:20 AM

Nice. Very nice.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-06-22 11:50 AM

you just like the shirt huh..thanks ali-san

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2011-06-23 11:56 PM

Fine writing...James

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-06-24 08:14 AM

thanks james

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