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Open Poetry #47

First Kiss

gordmer
Junior Member

since 2011-01-15

Posts 18
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2011-01-16 10:09 PM

A first kiss, long and sweet
Fierce and tender
Shivers to the depths of my body
Set kindle to my soul
The flame bursts forth, consuming my heart
An inferno raging out of control
To be tempered not, but for
Another...

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-16 10:26 PM

I agree. Kissing is like eating potato chips, one just will not do.

~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

2 posted 2011-01-16 11:56 PM

Thi is such a sweet poem. I could feel the love.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

3 posted 2011-01-17 03:47 PM

I can remember the first kiss ... It was good for me ... but my preschool teacher just said "thanks for the apple"

enjoyed the read

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2011-01-17 04:25 PM

Good expression of the wonderous event.

Yum!

Eric

Love does not look after it's own interests.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-01-17 05:07 PM

short, sweet and to the point...lovely

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

6 posted 2011-01-17 09:18 PM

ah, this is lovely...just lovely...i enjoyed it much!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

gordmer
Junior Member

since 2011-01-15

Posts 18
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2011-01-18 01:53 AM

Thank you all for your comments.

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