Open Poetry #47 |
eyes over shoulders |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I listen to the black trees along central lane how they whisper of the wind women dancing then they lean into my mind road shoulder dawn has new tattoos on her horizon skin perhaps she was alone too long in shadows and gathered the soot finger lingering there is a scent of freedom on breeze asphalt perfume bared to bosom valley with curves beyond that offer salvation some other sunday will erase this driveway but today it is eternal, predicted endless lit by the lies from velvet tongue whiskey and her eyes when offered over shoulders _______________ daark |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...I miss the winds of So Cal, but here we have our own. They are knocking the windchimes about as I write this and understand the distance it has come. Enjoyed this. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dark, It is feels as I am peeking around you as You ride to see what you see. But, even if I see it myself, it is not the same as seeing it through your eyes. Your eyes share with all the other senses. Thank you for the ride. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Martie....I am sure you have been down this road a few times...thank you for the wind chimes _____________ ms ali-san, parts of highway 1 with the ecul' trees scattered in black...seems they are always tall guardians watching. Would enjoy you riding along anytime little one. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Stunning in its entirety, your visuals are something to get lost in. Love, margherita |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
VERY nice, Stranger! Its been a while since I've read your stuff and you have really blossomed as a writer! :-) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I need to draw the line along the dream from last night... it might even match well, might scratch the way you think... I don't know. Maybe I won't... but you always make one want to write... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend for your eyes. ______________ mar8' thanks for the read ________________ ms sun, I can see you moving to the music...and I enjoy how you fit the notes...thanks lady |
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