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Tempting Me
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Tempting Me |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Eyes elsewhere with thoughts in tow Mind mired in tomorrow Worry calls weary walls of waiting Knows to the grindstone his heart must stay dedicated Burden bound by thoughts... Tempting me to take you away to the Tahiti of your dreamed someday memory My elsewhere eyes take you in tow wistful in missing for granted moments of unknotted brow's easy smile Worry calls weary walls of waiting His nose to the grindstone where he stays dedicated I'm burden bound by thoughts... Tempting me to take us away to a sunny sometime today Where sweet breezes blow tensions away Worries at bay Affection's easy and free Nothing there but you and me LGR(C)6/17/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I understand your empathy and frustration. ~ Those are my principles, and if you don't like them ... well, I have others. ~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Wow, Lori! I love this. It is so beautifully written. Great one, gal! Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How deeply poignant and beautiful, dear Lori. I think many can relate, as we always wish to lighten the burdens of those we love with all of our hearts. Tahiti seems a good place to recharge the batteries and disperse the worries.  Love, Margherita |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This makes a paintive song that touches me, Lori. A |
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