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Into My Soft
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Into My Soft |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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I would take you into my soft to lay your weary down and sweet my soothing to your burdened brow with kisses I would take you into my soft so lay your body down in my sweet soothing to your naked needs with kisses I would take you into my soft and hold your body round till my sweet soothing do your sleeping soft with kisses LGR(C)6/15/11 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This kind of loving repetition makes the years fly by, doesn't it? Very nice, my friend. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You do know how to get a guys attention . . . And hold it. Well articulated, poet. ~ Those are my principles, and if you don't like them ... well, I have others. ~ |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Well, you can take me anytime you want!!!! :------) |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, this one is captivating. Lovely use of language. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your title is just beautiful and your poem is so very warm and cozy~ |
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AmyLynn New Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 4South Carolina, USA |
I loved this poem for so so many reasons. I have always loved it when someone could write in sentences that you have to 'end in your own minds eye.' Does that make sense? I am so new at this site I don't even know how to post or ask any questions yet! lol. Anyway, I want to read MORE of you! |
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