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Open Poetry #47

a woman's heart

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2011-06-12 04:15 PM

       a woman’s heart

Beneath a whispering moon
and boundless universe
of endless possibilities,
in this star-bright midnight
   calm and solitude,
One poet dreams only of
a magic chance to explore
the infinitely gentle and generous
depths of a lovely woman’s heart,
always unfathomably grand and
   mysterious
as any wide wild sea!

           --- b. e. adams (6/11/2011)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-06-12 05:27 PM

Oh, dear Bruce, the moon whispered you into a very sweet longing and dreaming!

Boundless is the Universe, yes, and equally vast is a woman's heart, especially when it is explored and approached with such beautiful sensitivity, as you show here in this inspired work.

May your dream manifest!

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-06-12 05:47 PM

Bruce,

You kind of swept a piece of my breath away. This is lovely and plaintive and romantic ... and the moon lights it all up spledidly.

Alison

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-06-13 12:35 PM

You do romantic poetry very well, Bruce and not many poets can say that.
Ida

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2011-06-20 11:35 PM

Nice...James

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