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Open Poetry #47

Noah's Rain Tonight

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2011-06-11 03:32 AM

NOAH’S RAIN TONIGHT
10 June 2011

Sky tears
falling mournfully
down, down, ever down
seeping to the depths of the earth’s core
to the tune of
not us
any more.

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-06-11 06:34 PM

Most beautiful in its melancholy, dear Owl.

Love,
Margherita

Duck1946
Member

since 2011-05-16

Posts 84
Nebraska

2 posted 2011-06-12 03:44 PM

Delightful poem.
You have a gift!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2011-06-12 03:58 PM

Most melancholy and beautiful, Diana.

xoxoo
A

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2011-06-12 06:29 PM

Thank you, Margherita, Duck and Alison. Smiles.

Owl

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-06-13 11:35 AM

The last two lines make the poem. Love it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2011-06-13 11:57 AM

Thank you, Nan. Yes, I thought so too.

Owl

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