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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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born on a bayou raised by the trees killed a grizzly when he was five ate the heart and the button eyes made hot pot holders for ms martha out of the cotton stuffing remains he got his salvation when he turned 10 down at the clear-water revival show gave it back after he turned eleven and committed video game adultery while helping jesus cross the rio grande he was the most interesting man said of himself that he was amazing a june time zippo kind of gigajoule and that even july was coming soon just from reading his biography he welded stories on the ends of pens about flying bi-planes and bi-games about his yacht over in the sahara there dry docked and waiting for his predictions camouflaged in an ocean of his own invention he had been everywhere a dozen times known every woman and most men some without any carnal affection but most in heartfelt apatheticism that lingered well beyond his waking and in his dreams he was the other men the apostles and the masters, the healers he was everything to everyone then and though he didn't always drink beer he did prefer his own special blend though peeing in the bottle was bothersome ___________ daark (disdainer) representation of anyone living or dead is purely coincidental) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It may sound trivial, but this is a most interesting story about a most interesting man ... it's rather long for your standards, but I wanted it to go on ... (a "disdainer" series maybe?) So many great lines. made hot pot holders for ms martha out of the cotton stuffing remains  how creative he was!and committed video game adultery while helping jesus cross the rio grande Still altruistic in a way! he was the most interesting man said of himself that he was amazing The psychologist-guru of today would say that this is just the way to boost one's self-estimation. he welded stories on the ends of pens about flying bi-planes and bi-games Two highly adventurous ways of flying ... shows innate spirit of freedom. but most in heartfelt apatheticism that lingered well beyond his waking This is very sad. All the racing around without stopping maybe to allow the birth of love ... and in his dreams he was the other men the apostles and the masters, the healers he was everything to everyone then and though he didn't always drink beer he did prefer his own special blend though peeing in the bottle was bothersome great dreams I would say ... and the conclusion just says that he knew about self-healing methods. Wow, what a write! Reminded me a little of my friend and Italian Enfant Terrible of the Theatre/Cinema Carmelo Bene, who was a famous Dissacratore/Disdainer. He was much loved, but also much hated. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at you...Margherita said it best... but if he's looking for a woman to match his wit, I know, well, knew of one... she's probably in the room next to his'n.  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Nice read Dark, I've always enjoyed your style. Doc |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks lady friend...we have a dos equis beer commercial over here that kind of got me rolling on this. ____________ ms sun..thanks babe... ____________ doc, thanks for the read |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 I thought I recognized the inspiration! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..grin...yep and some CCR playing in the background..I watch the mex channel often with the sound turned off..the good guy always wins in their movies.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
After seeing the commercials, this piece becomes even more ingenious and really cracks me up. You are too cute! Love this little guy: |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS....Very clever!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady!! ____________ ms martie, thank you little neighbor. |
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