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Giving Notice
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Giving Notice I noticed you. I couldn't manage not too. You were desirable in my sight lingering within my thoughts so nice. You...it seemed to be a dream coming true when I noticed you. Tonite... I'm thinking about you wondering if you noticed me too. JamesLee 05June 2011 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Makes me think of an old, old, old song of John Prine's, "Donald and Lydia," which is not a bad comparison. ~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
this is lovely...great job as usual...this one definitely has universal appeal  Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And here I thought you were changing professions...  I'm so gullible.   |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When dreams fill the night, everything seems all right. Lovely, dear James! Love, Margherita |
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