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Keeping the Faith |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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the cold stings the senses into remission seen through icicles: the distortion of a life endured M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
there are likely far too many of us that can clearly relate to: "seen through icicles: the distortion of a life endured(!)" v. well put! |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is very beautifully written. I think all of us have been through what you wrote here. Like you also wrote, we endure.  When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ahaa, the big chill!! Short and to the point! It's been a while and it's good to read you again. Hope your day gets better~ |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Everything is a distortion when viewed through eyes which see not. I liked the image of ice distorting things and related it to the coldness within. ~ Why Do Gorillas Have Big Nostrils? / Because They Have Big Fingers. ~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very cool, lady m, a vivid portrait you have painted...enjoyed |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep, know what you mean Maureen Seen through icicles what a wonderful way to express it. Hang in there kid ya got talent! Eric Love does not look after it's own interests. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely on the first read, but it gets better with each subsequent one! Owl |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
I've always loved icicles. Nicely done, M. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Wonderful write! ooxx Marti I do the <font color=FF6600><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Maureen ... much colder on the outside looking in for sure nice writing |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
A short but profound poem...enjoyed it much. There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Bruce, so nice that you are still here to give me a boost once in a while  Thank you.The_Doctors_Angel_32, I certainly can endure...but this lingering cold weather is beginning to wear me out! Lori, my days are whatever they are...once I get moving nothing else matters. It's a Snow/Ice day today...no school again! JP, some days I feel like we are living in the Arctic, having so many days of freezing weather in a row definitely slows one day when not use to it. steavenr, Thank you for the cool reply! e, you are always such a sweethheart. Not so sure about the talent...I seem to be wearing down or is that wearing out!?! M Diana, hope it's warmer where you are. Thank you for responding and for the updates on Linda.  M RMW- well looky here~~ a stranger~~ missed you and hope all is well in your area of the country. The iceman has cometh today!( Not you, but the weather) Marti, Thank you! Rex, definitely colder on the outside! Thanks. faithmairee, short was all I could produce when my mind is almost as frozen as the icicles I see. Thank you, everyone, M |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Perfect. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Again, I thank you XGX. M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey, sweetie? My icicles are melting right about now...a little. How about yours? P.S. Send me a picture of that "doll"...  WHOA! RMW is back?  Where'd he go? Where'd he go? |
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