Open Poetry #47 |
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the price of perfume |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA ![]() |
a woman should always wear expensive perfume even if she has to skip a meal here and there the price of perfume may go up but her waistline will go down There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Gotta love constructive poetry . . . ~ Even if you are on the right track, you'll get run over if you just sit there.--Will Rogers ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
ha....don't men love the rich smell of good perfume???? LOL There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, with this one you brought smiles, dear Faith. If it was up to our favorite perfume to get those pounds down, well it would be such a welcome trick! Funny, just yesterday I thought how disturbing strong perfume was ... crossing a couple of women who wore too much of it, in my opinion. But then I am not a man ![]() The fragrances are either loved passionately or detested. And we also change our preferences throughout the years. I was once given a giant bottle of "Fiji" eau de toilette and couldn't stand it on my skin, so I gave it away. A few years later I fell in love with that fragrance. But now I prefer again the fresh agrumi notes .... in summer, and white musk in winter ... ![]() Love and happy fragrant clouds ... Margherita |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Margherita-Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed my little poem. I have my favorite perfume just wish it wasn't so expensive. Which is why I wrote this poem. I just tried to put a little humor in it. Thanks for being here. Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
smiles...that explains so much ![]() |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
This was a cute one! Maybe I would lose weight if I tried it, LOL! Kat >^..^< |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..classic lyric..enjoyed.. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This is delightful Faith! I enjoyed it very much, too cute! Lori |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...sometimes perfume walks a fine line...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now my friend, therein lies an answer to the unasked but thought of question... "how did she do that?" Brava! |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear steavenr-Thanks so much for dropping by and for your wonderful remarks. I'm glad you enjoyed my little poem ![]() Love, faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Kat-Thank you for being here Kat. It's always great to see you stopped by. Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Spiros-Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciat that. Love, faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Lori-I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always enjoy what you have to say. ![]() Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear James-Thank you. Yes, you are right about the fine line thing. Even the best perfume can be overdone if applied too heavily. I just don't think too many like the smell of cheap perfume. Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Sunshine-Thank you, dear lady for stopping by to read my poem. You made me smile ![]() Love-Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
This is well-written but kind of sad, faithmairee. I believe I get the drift of it. |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
This brought a huge smile to my face.! What a great piece of writing. ooxx Marti I do the MS Walk everyday!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree. Clever write. Ida |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear easy1-Thanks so much for stopping by and responding to my poem. I really appreciate it. Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Marti-Thank you so much. I'm honored by your remarks. Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
Dear Ida-Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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