Open Poetry #47 |
Juncture |
Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Juncture Late at night, alone She walks the quiet avenue Erect and proud with an air about her She stops at an appealing spot Orders a drink and listens Through the open door To the mournful sounds of a saxophone In a club across the street. Finishing his gig for the night He carefully cleans and puts away What has become his life The pure essence of the man Then joins the others for one tall frosty one He leaves the club turning at the corner And with his saxophone held close Heads down the late night street To his one-room flat and more nothing. She also leaves heading back down the quiet avenue. They meet at the corner, exchange smiles She feels her heart skip a beat Then thinks about her flight in the morning He thinks about her and then about tomorrow's promising audition. Both stop to gaze in shop windows Obligations over temptation battle within as They continue on their separate ways The now quiet night shudders as Destiny screams at their rejection. ©Copyright Marcia Miller-Twiford |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice write. ~ Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice doggie' until you can find a rock ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-30-2011 04:38 PM).] |
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Brian James Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 147Winnipeg |
Really beautiful. This is my favourite kind of poetry... storytelling with occasional, epigrammatic take-away lines. My favourites are "more nothing" and "obligations over temptation battle within." Missed opportunities are the stuff of poetry. I can relate and I'm sure a lot of people can. Life's little "what ifs" linger and often inspire. I'll try to keep my eyes peeled and not let the next one that comes my way pass by. Again, beautiful poem. I may want to read this again in the future so I'm adding it to my library. I'll read more of your poetry. "To me, the thing that art does for life is to clean it, to strip it to form." |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Thank you Brian. I hope you enjoy what you do read. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY well done! fine 'slice of life' impression!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Excellent work, dear Marcia! I agree with Brian that this poem calls out to be read more than once. Brava! Love, Margherita |
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