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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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PURE 22 May 2011 Touching last shimmer silver soprano note pure drenching aching hearts. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Achingly beautiful, dear Owl. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
dear Owl, this is delightful, I could hear it, thank you yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Margherita. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, Yann. I am glad you heard it. Owl |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
The poem speaks to me of love magic.. I see two on a park bench waiting for dark, they hear a cardinal nearby-- that gives the "all is well" signal.. in a "silver soprano note pure" I may be way off here...but this is what I see.. And I hope you don't mind, Diana, if I add two lines--the poem is inspiring..and although it stands very well on its own..these two lines came into my head.. "Touching last shimmer silver soprano note pure drenching aching hearts." With loves potent elixer; Red bird song at eventide. Namaste ford |
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