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Namyh
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since 2009-01-20

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0 posted 2011-05-27 08:24 PM

A Rush of Lust

I was caught in an orgasmic rush of Lust
that burned my soul into ashened dust.
It gripped like a current plummetting within
as blood cells roasted in sizzling Sin.
Hot images flipped thru my mind like pages.
Nerve endings fired with synaptic rages.
Breath was shortened 'til there was hardly none
as I gasped for air in each Love stunned lung.

My veins expanded for blood in and out.
Nostrils flared for the oxygen drought.
My pores burst open to release the sweat
that would cool the body's pulsing jets.
My temperature felt to be one hundred and seven
where convulsions occur, enroute to Love heaven.
I was spellbound caught in this majestic rapture
that all men and women must yield to capture.

Being caught just once is all that's needed
to prime this yearning with a need to feed it.
And such appetite Urge of sacred distinction
is Man fighting back from the edge of extinction
on an arc of passion burning far and wide
that bends towards peace when its fire subsides
to wait in the high grass for that pelvic thrust
from the pounce of the panther in a rush of Lust.
Whew !

Namyh

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-27 09:43 PM

Whew! is right, Namyh.

"I gasped for air in each Love stunned lung."

Damn! THAT is one hellofa wild line, made the whole poem for me.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2011-05-27 10:03 PM

You are on fire and I worked up a sweat reading your poem. Keep posting your poetry and I'll keep reading them...and loving them.

Love this for sure.
A

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2011-05-28 12:06 PM

You do keep us on the edge of our seats, Namyh.
Keep them coming.
ida

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-05-29 03:40 PM

Dear Namyh, this should hang on the wall in the studio of any sexual therapist.

It is a great combination of scientific information and poetic presentation of the related pleasure.

Great work.

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2011-05-29 05:03 PM

VERY WELL DONE!!

Really enjoyed the "rush".

j.

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2011-05-29 09:36 PM

This gave me a rush...
Like a "pelvic thrust"
Or the "pounce of a panther"
Great metaphors-great poem.
I enjoyed reading it.

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

7 posted 2011-05-30 12:55 PM

JerryP – I guess that is indeed a phrase that defines the impact of Love with its wild ride and its stun to the lungs. So glad it gasped for you. Thanks for enjoying and thanks for the “Whew’ JP. Namyh

Namyh
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Posts 988

8 posted 2011-05-30 12:56 PM

Alison – If this work was sufficient to ignite a fire and work up a sweat too when reading, then it validates that we poets have words as tools to unlock doors of the human heart. We should consider ourselves lucky. Thanks Alison for sure loving this. Namyh

Namyh
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Posts 988

9 posted 2011-05-30 12:57 PM

Ida – I wrote this from the edge of my seat. I just figured it would be the best place for others to read it too. I hope this made you pant a little. Thanks Ida. Namyh

Namyh
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Posts 988

10 posted 2011-05-30 12:58 PM

Margherita – If this work provides half the clarity enough for a therapist to hang it on a studio wall, then it’s only fair that the other half of therapy should come with a big discount. Fat chance of that happening! Ha! Ha! Ha! Thanks for enjoying the information and the presentation, which by the way I’m gonna hang on my studio wall and that’s more than enough therapy for me. And I’m not even going to charge myself! Thanks M. Namyh

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

11 posted 2011-05-30 12:59 PM

J – Everyone should have at least one “rush” in the day to be really enjoyed. So very glad you found one here. So very glad I had one to provide. Namyh

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

12 posted 2011-05-30 01:01 PM

Ice – A poet’s day is made when a poet’s work can put the panther’s pounce in someone’s pelvic thrust while reading it. It’s an honor for any poet and a rush too. Thanks Ice. Namyh

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