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Pirouette |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Circles spiraling steps twirling pirouette around and around I go coming and going I meet myself no time to talk in a spin I'm in getting dizzy going nowhere LGR5/26/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Gotta love it. Ya made me dizzy, but I hung in there. ~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Wow, it does kind of corkscrew the ole eyeballs down the page doesn't it? Thanks for pointing that out...makes it even better! Lori |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dance is such lovely physical poetry in its purest form, to my mind's eye, and a "pirouette""? It's such a great word for grace and you've done it justice, Lori. There's some longing between the lines that I found intriguing.  |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
ah, very nicely done...reminded me of my ballet dancing days as a teenager...very well-written as usual. Love, Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Good example of concrete poetry..form and story line match..I enjoyed the visual and the song. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
and then you have to lose Alice and return to reality....'life's a beach' sometimes, isn't it. well done... j. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is childhood... adult style. Good job, young lady. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wait! I'm going with you. Ida |
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