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faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

0 posted 2011-05-26 07:47 PM

there is a special place i go
if only in my dreams
it's filled with many flowers
an ocean, waterfall and streams
there are no signs directing me
but i know which way to go

the stone-white wall hides it all
from beauty and truth's foes
i always stop to take a swim
this i seem to do with perfect ease
upon awakening i feel so free-
filled with peace and serenity

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-26 08:14 PM

Ah, that's the object and desired effect, to awaken feeling refreshed and ready for the world. Nice poem.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-05-26 08:17 PM

Thanks so much, my friend. I appreciate your lovely words.

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-05-26 08:59 PM

you lucky snoozer you! I remember waking up like that as a child. I liked it!
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

4 posted 2011-05-26 09:38 PM

yes, it is a lovely reocurring dream...i haven't dreamed it in a while but it is always great when i do...

thanks for your comments, Lori...i always appreciate them

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2011-05-27 10:18 AM

It's dreams like that that make you wish you never, ever, had to wake up and face reality.

Very nice that we are given the ability to see, experience, such wonder ourselves though,if only through dreams.

love it,,

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2011-05-27 10:50 AM

faithmairee, this is a fantastic dream that I would like to have too, very beautiful and peaceful, I think I would love it and share a beautiful harmony,

thanks for the lovely poem,

yann

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-06-02 10:15 PM

thank you both so much...i'm sorry it took so long to reply but i am working overtime lately and haven't been able to get on here as much as i would like to...your comments really touched me...

Love,

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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