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Open Poetry #47

Baby, Song Baby

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

0 posted 2011-05-26 01:24 PM

Baby!

Cries of tears

You have come home

To mom like a good child

I knew you would come crying

When my breasts are oozing milk,

Its long since you went off my gut, off my being

A gasp that made you made me rich ( or so I thought)

I carried you sometime to nobody’s notice ( or so I thought)

When you rolled off my hips, you were still mine ( or so I thought )

Like every child born, you were a sweetly pain to bear

I was busy cooking food, I took you away from my chest

I thought I will give you milk after the food’s cooked

Did you cry before you ran away? My deaf ears

were at that time searching for music

Where were you, all long, my baby?

I had embraced my barenness

Now you’ve come

Am leaking milk!
P.S.: Its free verse, which I have tried to creatively format.

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-26 03:06 PM

I wasn't going to comment on this, because I wasn't sure what you meant. But I decided to check out your bio and clicked on the picture of the mermaid and baby, and it all made sense. You should have put the picture on here. Well, on second thought maybe not, they might have gotten nasty about it. Great poem now that I understand where you were coming from.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

2 posted 2011-05-29 12:16 PM

Thank you JerryPat2 for your kind words.

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