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Open Poetry #47

hearing the unspoken

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2011-05-25 08:03 PM

tho strange thru the haze
the memories fade
yet become so clear
as if I were there
again
hearing you speak to me
tho I never heard
a thing

you wanted so desparately
to hold my hand
then you let go
and never told me
what I needed to know

so now

after the fog

and thru the raging storms

I fight back tears,
give into anger,
and try desparaately
to hear the words
that I never heard
maybe because
they were never spoken....

~~~kingsangel~~~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-05-25 08:51 PM

This almost has a humorous side to it, but it is anything but funny. I like your slapstick way of writing. You have your heart and soul invested in this poem.

~ I went to a restaurant that serves "breakfast at any time" / I ordered French Toast during the Renaissance ~

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