Open Poetry #47 |
Sticky Notes |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sticky Notes © wesley james beard, jr. march 2011 [This message has been edited by jwesley (05-25-2011 09:33 AM).] |
||
© Copyright 2011 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved | |||
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I gauge a poem's qaulity by if it touches me. You tapped into a bit of guilt I am feeling at the moment. I better call my cousin tomorrow. I think we tend to put off things that cause regret because it is hard to face the feelings that we know will come with tough times. It's time for me to face the feelings and reach out. Thank you for the sticky note. Love Alison |
||
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words and Alison's reply say it better than I ever could~~ M |
||
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I'm bumping this, well penned Love is the life of the soul... |
||
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, I was thinking tonight before I read this of a brother who, for the last few years have been . . . distance. I need to find his phone number. I know it has been changed. Thanks for this tonight, you touched a few people, and I'm sure will touch more before this gets read out. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~ |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad this came back up! *S* I think we're all guilty of putting off that call... and then living with the regrets when we realize the opportunity is gone. Beautiful work!! |
||
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow... this is beautiful, and poignant. A stark, vivid reminder that it all starts with us, and expending the effort to not just wile away, silently. Great write, and even moreso with the images. Michael |
||
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
||
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
What a great write. Sure makes one think... Enjoyed. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
||
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Jimmy, I never came back to this poem to tell you the rest of my story. I did call my cousin after reading this poem. He died two months later. Thank you, my friend. xoxoxo Alison |
||
ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
To just say hi doesn't take long and is really effortless, enjoyed your poem j wesley, Ms. e |
||
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Need that sticky note that says, "Just do it!" Nicely done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
||
Kethry D Member
since 2010-04-12
Posts 64Australia |
Enjoyed the poem, but it's strange when I start using sticky notes it means chaos and I need to take a step back and reflect. A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |