Open Poetry #47 |
Sorry, she said |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
SORRY, SHE SAID 20 May 2011 She turned to him and said she was sorry but she had to go far away forever. He asked why and opened his arms and his heart and his voice and she flew into them. That was all she needed . . . but . . . though, it broke her heart, she just couldn’t stay, so she had to say. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We are the co-creators of our lives ... no one to blame but ourselves if we decide for broken hearts against open arms ... I feel sorry for you because you decided to say sorry ... which is of course not comforting to empty arms. Ahhh .... love! Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I didn't say the poem was about me, Margherita. Smiles. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Good for you, dear Diana! Then it means I feel sorry for HER ... "Love Story" comes to mind where she says "love means never having to say you are sorry ...", but then that was a movie. There are no doubt situations in which it is sensitive and sensible to say sorry. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I didn't say the poem wasn't about me, either, Margherita. Smiles. I think it helps to know the circumstances, too, before one judges. After all, love doesn't judge. Smiles. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, then, of one thing only I can be sure, it is not about ME! ... not the ME of now anyway ... but gosh the ME of the past has surely said what you have expressed in this poem ... too many times! How sad! I say that with regard to me ... Maybe I should say I am sorry! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have added the sentence about judgement ... certainly I did not intend to judge. Silence is probably the best option ... Hugs, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Diana I can feel the scene, the emptiness of each one reagrding love, the hesitation cause it is the most important matter, this is dramatic, but everyone has to respect oneself and take good decisions...Thanks for the thoughtful write, yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for your very kind reply, Yann, and for understanding so well. Smiles. Owl |
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