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Dialogue |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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This is it and I'm gone. Is this your sweet swan song? You're right, I'm outta here. I'm choked up, see my tear? I hate you, and your guts. Make sure the door is shut. You're not listening to me. Sssh! Wrestling's on TV. That's all you have to say? Don't just stand there and bray. You don't care if I go? If that's what you want, Flo. Well, I could stay tonight. Guess that'll be alright. Can I get you a beer? I'll make room for you here. What was the fight about? Later, want to go out? Or we could fool around. I'm horny as a hound. ~ 24 hours in a day ... 24 beers in a case .... Coincidence? ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, this was amusing at first read...but the deeper truth here is sad and oh so common...it speaks volumes. Good write my friend. Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes it does, Lori. Although I wrote it to be amusing I was trying to make a point, and it seems, with you, I did. Thank you. ~ 24 hours in a day ... 24 beers in a case .... Coincidence? ~ |
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